“Teaching is an impossible chicken-and-egg dilemma. It’s a small miracle whenever it works” (Lynn 250). Absolutely, and anyone who says differently has never been a teacher. There are many obstacles to overcome in order for teaching to “work,” and Richard Haswell’s article on the complexities of responding to student writing outlines just one of the numerous challenges for any teacher, particularly one who teaches composition. I think his warnings against shortcuts taken for teacher convenience alone are good reminders not to forget the goal of education, student learning. I love his candor in saying that “if productive response to (student) writing, despite all the shortcuts we can contrive, still is laborious, that is what we are paid to do.” Yes, the life of a teacher is not glamorous, and there are weekends or evenings taken up with reading and responding to student writing. Anyone who has spent any time in a teacher’s lounge is familiar with all of the teacher gripes, but in the end, we are getting paid (even if it’s not enough) to do a job, and nobody said it was going to be easy.
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The teachers' lounge was a place I usually stayed away from, in part to avoid listening to all the gripes and complaints about students. It can be a disillusioning place, and so my t-shirt would more aptly say, "What happens and what's said in the teachers' lounge is best to be avoided," although it's certainly not as catchy. |
Still it is comforting and “uplifting to know that less can sometimes be better” in regard to responding to student writing. I think Haswell gives some excellent examples and practical advice, and I like his philosophy of “minimal marking.” If only I had known about it before I entered the classroom; again I’m angry at the inadequacies of teacher education, mentoring, and on the job training. I may have used a pencil instead of a red pen for my marks, so my students’ papers looked like explosions of ashen smudges instead of blood baths, but they were of course no less detrimental. I remember in particular one student who was so distraught by all of my markings on a paper he thought was going to get an A. He was totally disheartened and lost all interest in revising his work. I had gotten into teaching in part to make a difference, to build students’ self esteem, not to break their spirit. And I can’t wait to try again someday, this time older and wiser, stronger and more assured.
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Am I the only one who thinks it should be the cat instead of the dog who wants to annihilate his human's writing? I just know my cats think they're smarter than me. |
Once again, I found Lynn to be a pleasant read with much sage advice, such as: “Give assignments that will inspire and educate your students; mark their papers fairly and constructively in ways that help them.” I also like that he advocates for teachers to do what works for them as far as what to be called, how to dress, how to format a syllabus, etc. These types of concerns were covered extensively in my education courses, but often with more biases towards the conservative, like wearing pantsuits instead of khakis and button-downs. I also remember the clichéd advice, “Don’t smile until Christmas.” Come on! I knew that wasn’t and never will be me, and I appreciate how Lynn understands that everyone is different and what works for one might not work for another.
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Lynn believes that "writing pedagogy begins with your answer to the question of the meaning of life" (257). Let's just hope you don't get your answer from a bathroom stall. |
But before Lynn gets to this practical new teacher advice, he discusses the theories that underlie composition pedagogy, and he even delves into politics in the classroom. Although I see where Hairston is coming from in her assertion that “the classroom is not the place for politics, progressive or otherwise,” I also think that it can’t be ignored, much the same as cultural and societal issues can’t be ignored (as discussed in last week’s class). Although I feel like it’s not a teacher’s role to advance his/her political agenda, it also isn’t right for a teacher to have to “disappear” and take on a neutral identity. As a student, I am always disappointed when a teacher refuses to answer a question like, “Well what do you think about gay marriage?” I think honest and open discussions are a hallmark of a good teacher, and when students are writing about and peer editing papers on issues that affect their lives, these political questions will arise. In the end, I agree with Lynn that “we are better off if we pose the right problems and give students the right tools, trusting them to find the right sides for themselves.”
"I had gotten into teaching in part to make a difference, to build students’ self esteem, not to break their spirit." - I love that sentiment. It is a great philosophy to bring into the classroom.
ReplyDeleteThis is the part of the Lynn reading I wrestled most with: “we are better off if we pose the right problems and give students the right tools, trusting them to find the right sides for themselves.”
I don't know that I agree. I can't say that I disagree either.
It is hard for me to even begin discussing this one little sentence, because there are so many underlying assumptions on both sides of the argument.
For my part, having studied the science of politics in undergrad, I learned that most people have the opinions they do(concerning politics) primarily because of two factors: 1)Their parents' political beliefs and 2)their own life experiences.
So, even if we present students the 'right tools', that does not mean we can guarantee that students will be able to break free from influences that have already framed how they see the world.
As such, it may be necessary for us as teachers to uncover/expose/explain the power dynamics that drive society in order to provide students with an alternative frame.
Still, I am torn about how best to accomplish such a goal. Or even that such a goal should be pursued in the classroom.
Ultimately, I think I feel we would be doing our students a disservice if we did not raise some of these issues in the classroom.
You make some good points, Jonathan, and I understand where you're coming from. But, even if students are influenced by parents, friends, and other experiences, should teachers really be just another influence pushing students towards their beliefs? When will we let them choose for themselves? At some point they have to decide and choose to believe in what is right for them.
ReplyDeleteBut, I do agree that we can't ignore political issues (just as we can't ignore cultural issues), and I think the classroom should be a safe and open environment for such discussions. How I took Lynn's comment was that the "right tools" are presenting all sides of an issue and letting the students choose what's right for them. I don't think it's the teacher's place to push his agenda on his students.
Part of the reason some of us find it so difficult to teach writing is because it's so subjective. I mean, we can look at the technical components, depending on the type of writing, but to make objective comments can be difficult. Teachers' feedback may sometimes come across as persuasive or 'pushing an agenda' when it was meant in a completely different context. That's why I found the problems with communication between teachers and students mentioned in Haswell's article so interesting.
ReplyDeleteAmen to your thoughts on the teachers' lounge. Sometimes I needed a place to go and vent, but there were other times I took a break from the gossip and complaining . . . it can really wear you down.
ReplyDeleteOne of the hardest things about teaching writing and building a community of writers is that you can't do so without discussing the writing . . . and sometimes that brings with it sensitive/political/controversial topics. There's a fine line, I think, with how much teachers share with students, and I tend to fall on the somewhere on the teacher is neutral side--but even then, even teacher feedback/interaction is subjective. We're all human, even teachers . . . I don't think there was a child I taught in 1999 that didn't know how Columbine affected me. And I don't think that's a bad thing.
Maggie, I think you and I are on the same page, but something got lost in translation. But, I like where our dialogue was going, so let's see if we can't hash it out.
ReplyDeleteYour first concern was this:
"should teachers really be just another influence pushing students towards their beliefs?"
This has me perplexed, because my response does not mention/suggest pushing students towards a teacher's belief.
Here is what I said:
...it may be necessary for us as teachers to uncover/expose/explain the power dynamics that drive society in order to provide students with an alternative frame.
I can be coming from the far left of the political spectrum, the far right, or anywhere in between. Whatever view I hold of politics does not change/affect the power dynamics of our society.
Exposing/explaining/uncovering is a way to allow students to understand how their world works, so that they can make independent choices.
So, I think we share the same ultimate goal:
"When will we let them choose for themselves? At some point they have to decide and choose to believe in what is right for them."
The trick is to figure out a way to have our students break free from influences that have already framed how they see the world.
PS. I received your email. Strange that you couldn't post. My only guess is that somehow you may have been posting at the exact same time I was editing the blog (which I did several times throughout the day). I did enjoy the link you passed along. I think if you tried to post one more time you should not have any difficulties.
ReplyDeletecheers,
Jonathan
Jonathan -- let's talk in class. I think we definitely misunderstood each other. That's easy to do when not communicating face to face. Also, I'll try posting that link one more time in a comment on your blog.
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